Watching it in 2024

@jacobbravo8943

Ай бұрын

Real 😢

5 tips to improve your writing 1) Don't use Contractions such as; don't, can't, shouldn't use; do not cannot should not 2) Avoid there is/ there are There are many issues that students face at university Students face many issues at university 3) Don't use common words such as; really, very, a lot, so 4) Use active voice instead of passive 5)Use strong verbs

@vazedashaikh6127

7 жыл бұрын

Tarkan Gürpınar Thnks for summarizing.

@Hekeepsitclassy

7 жыл бұрын

Safir Semon crap

@tarkang657

7 жыл бұрын

how in the world would you use that in an essay wtf :D:DD:D

@claudiavillatoro9982

7 жыл бұрын

definitely some people do, for example, English learners like me. These tips will be helpful for my writing proficiency test, which I am about to take.

@muhammadalam6965

7 жыл бұрын

Tarkan Gürpınar s

I’ll help you out if you’re taking notes. 0:29 Do not use contractions 1:40 Avoid using there is/there are 3:05 Avoid using really/very/a lot 6:06 Use active voice instead of passive voice 9:00 Use strong verbs

@rosemallowss1309

3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much

@monikahasda3934

2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much

@walkover-cc1dm

2 жыл бұрын

Tyvm

@discoveryourvision7132

2 жыл бұрын

best

@user-wl8om5eu1j

2 жыл бұрын

She did this

Essays literally are my weakness. They also scare me a lot. 😭

@bernadette4458

3 жыл бұрын

I feel you bro...

@susanmercy9367

3 жыл бұрын

Me too bro

@murrey1646

3 жыл бұрын

I’m so good at math and science but I literally cannot write an essay for shit. I put so much hard work but I don’t get good grade

@khiladi1116

3 жыл бұрын

Same... 🙁🙁🙁🙁

@djaziko457

3 жыл бұрын

Goddamn same

It's ironic that in spoken English we use long sentences to sound smart, but in written English we achieve that result with short sentences.

@gagangrewal4706

7 жыл бұрын

CM Randall and.

@Josh-Parkhill

7 жыл бұрын

Why is that ironic?

@roayasaaida3851

6 жыл бұрын

because people prefer listening more than reading

@conditionalbee9603

6 жыл бұрын

CM Randall My sentences are always too long whenever I'm writing

@feedhyungwonplease6087

6 жыл бұрын

Cause a reader will be bored if the sentence is too long

I'm already a better writer than I was 15 minutes ago, thank you.

@longjunior7638

3 жыл бұрын

😂good keep it up😂

Writing is such a skill to have. It’s like forming a puzzle. I’ve always envied people that could tell stories n write.

This is useful because I was surprised why my teacher circled “so” and other words in a red pen in most of my essays

@rebeccabeverly8121

2 жыл бұрын

Hey there. if you need help with any of your writing assignments be it literature review, annotated bibliography, letter applications, essays , dissertations, research papers, etc. in any course or subject, please get in touch with me through my email (rebeccabeverly630@gmail.com) and I will be glad to help you out. TIA.

@dmdm9198

2 жыл бұрын

Really shows you teacher sucked because all she did was grade and not teach

@mouna8883

2 жыл бұрын

@@rebeccabeverly8121 hello, please can I send you an email too? I need help but I have no one to help me.

I’m using these tips for my selective exams tommorrow, pray for me

@kameliyaoppal

5 жыл бұрын

IceyShot hey 👋🏼 how was your exam?

@siloni8616

5 жыл бұрын

Yeah how was it

@Supot176

5 жыл бұрын

What happened to your exam?

@charismatalks8477

5 жыл бұрын

@@Supot176 Press F to pay respect

@kimjong-un8543

5 жыл бұрын

Howd it go

1.do not use contractions ex.don't can't shouldn't 2.avoid there is &there are 3.don't use really ,a lot ,so &very 4.use active voice 5.use strong verbs

Who else watch this the day before the exam

@xintrea_2140

3 жыл бұрын

I literally am/:

@sov_eleanor9542

3 жыл бұрын

Yall pray for me bros😭😭😭

@harinisatishkumar2243

3 жыл бұрын

@@sov_eleanor9542 Even me. ATB

@aynahan8599

3 жыл бұрын

my english exam is in 3 days 🤷🏻

@sidra2k5

3 жыл бұрын

MEEE

wow i was never taught this kind of stuff at my highschool, surprised i got the grades i did in English

@exoticcats6119

3 жыл бұрын

For the past year or two my teachers haven’t taught me anything new

@enricdomingo7096

3 жыл бұрын

Exotic Cats so did mine

@enricdomingo7096

3 жыл бұрын

Exotic Cats all they did was do the whole thing again. Notthing new

@glennhonestly6600

3 жыл бұрын

Dont tell me they never taught abt contractions

@user-br5ip7tq1b

3 жыл бұрын

sorry,the passive voice

Just watching this video has raised my grade up from a 75 to a 95 😍 thank you.

@LEONLOVESMUSIC

4 жыл бұрын

Awesome bro you maded this video work in your exams

@akagrimreaper6702

4 жыл бұрын

How!? I had a 78% and I got 5 A’s in a row, and I still don’t even have a 85% yet

@twasadream496

4 жыл бұрын

You saying that gives me hope

@sayanidhar7476

4 жыл бұрын

You guys even get 75?

@zeeeabhaize3244

4 жыл бұрын

@@sayanidhar7476 hahaha happy to see someone had the same reaction as me

Oh my god! I just realized that I might have been making these mistakes all my life. And, all it took was a few minutes of conscious effort and practice. Thanks, this is super useful.

WHO ELSE IS WATCHING THIS IN 2022 AND BEYOND

@quanghuyvu116

3 жыл бұрын

me

@saberivy9942

3 жыл бұрын

Maybė...

@mofenyimudabuka7034

3 жыл бұрын

Me

@saberivy9942

3 жыл бұрын

@@mofenyimudabuka7034 ö

@zainalkaddu9152

3 жыл бұрын

Me too

Let me guess, you searched this and it didn't get recommended. Thanks for 1 like!

@trousleperson632

3 жыл бұрын

56 likes now XD

@alexanderdelapaz5637

3 жыл бұрын

99 likes now lol

@bob1244

3 жыл бұрын

I have the power of being the 100th like🌚

@trousleperson632

3 жыл бұрын

@@bob1244 lucky 😭

I attend university online, at Ashford University. Your videos have helped me, so much in my writing. Thank you, and keep up the good work.

@Technicalwriter

4 жыл бұрын

Good

I think you can learn from this free video than from the $91 book I had to buy for my English class.

@JesperSalama

6 жыл бұрын

Your sentence seems incomplete?

@erickaguero1439

6 жыл бұрын

sebastian cuello I bet money you did not even read the 91$ book, yet you complain how useless the book is. Take the easy route and watch videos, that would help you more than reading a book, you mundane fool.

@filiplindstrii4581

6 жыл бұрын

sebastian cuello o

@dragonflyhk

5 жыл бұрын

Whether you prefer watching videos or reading books, continue to practice you writing skills. Finding books your are interested in reading will help your writing improve as well.

@nemesis043

5 жыл бұрын

exactly

my teacher gave me an extension to submit my assessment and im so happy cause she is so nice and i would be sad if i put no effort into something that she gave me extra time to do

@gxsai

4 жыл бұрын

aw that’s sweet

@irpansalampenjelajah6067

4 жыл бұрын

Great

@CrystalFaith294

4 жыл бұрын

Uhhh

@gichuruboniface2767

3 жыл бұрын

@@CrystalFaith294 I can help with assignments and essays

This video really helped me. I thought it's more formal and smart to write something in longer sentences 😂

@minnicute2544

3 жыл бұрын

Me too😂😂

@anamavarez6941

3 жыл бұрын

Me too lmao I swore "conducted an investigation" sounded formal and smart sajdasd

I always tought Passive voice was more formal than active voice. Thanks!!

Thank you, Emma. You increased my english knowledge.

@rajachowdaryvepuri4880

8 жыл бұрын

Sirad Hanad where is task 2 video

@redstonegate5896

8 жыл бұрын

+Sirad Hanad "enrich" is used better on "knowledge"

@shubhamdhruv9836

8 жыл бұрын

+RedstoneGate lol

@siddhantbiradar1791

7 жыл бұрын

even I play minecraft

@Meteaura22

6 жыл бұрын

You mean enrich rather than increased.

Emma, this is great! I am recommending it to my students and have sent the video to colleagues. I've even embedded it in a blog post I wrote on academic or formal writing. Really well done and very enjoyable. Brava!

I have been learning English for one year and I always love your videos on KZread. I’ve learned many things and today I learn to be a good writer. Thank you for always sharing.

I got 86 (overall) and 22 on the speaking section and 21 in writing. Thanks for all your amazing videos. Without them, I could not make it.

@kismatsapkota3309

6 жыл бұрын

Juliana Bassetti yes

Ironic actually, short sentences are powerful, to the points, thanks Emma, you are something else.😊

@armyalwaystogether7406

3 жыл бұрын

Same here

@ayeshamehrban3249

3 жыл бұрын

@@armyalwaystogether7406 lol

Wow. I couldnt agree more. Great tips! I am in school for engineering, however, I wanted to make sure that my communication skills were "clean" and powerful. This helped immensely, you are a fantastic teacher.

Very useful tips! Thanks!

@ldaniii

3 жыл бұрын

Che que buen video el de hoy

@rebeccabeverly8121

2 жыл бұрын

Hey there. if anyone of you needs help with any of their writing assignments be it literature review, annotated bibliography, letter applications, essays , dissertations, research papers, etc. in any course or subject please get in touch with me through my email (rebeccabeverly630@gmail.com) and I will be glad to help you out. TIA.

Thank you for helping me because when I checked my grades today, I saw that I had an F in ELA and started crying so I decided to look for videos to help me and this helped me a lot

@ambercoelho9232

3 жыл бұрын

same

I just wanted to thank you for all that you’re doing. Your teachings helped me big time and I scored 7 bands in Writing. Keep up the good work and wish you all the very best!!

Thank you very much! I got 96 marks on my writing!! Thank youx999999999

I am very grateful for this type of support to those of us who need it. Much appreciated!

@KoffiBossoMath

6 ай бұрын

I agree

Best teacher are not measured through knowledge, experienced and awards that you get or you may gain. What make the teachers absolutely amazing are there dedication, patience and passion to share/teach things that make a person much better than yesterday. Your one of the amazing teacher Ms. Emma. I can tell it when I often see you smile while discussing the lesson. The way you teach reach not just to me but I am sure to all your learner. Thanks for the upload and to all the teachers out there thank you so much.💗

I struggle so much about n writing essays just nothing comes to mind

@yucenyao5438

4 жыл бұрын

Brian D me toooo i can’t even write a good essay in my mother tongue

@bobby3509

4 жыл бұрын

Brian D I LITERALLY HAVE THIS PROBLEM TOO! I’ve been searching online for what I can do about it but can’t find any... 💀

@lucifer7458

4 жыл бұрын

Read books and novels, that might help

@RukhShariq

4 жыл бұрын

@@lucifer7458 any book suggestions

@lucifer7458

4 жыл бұрын

@@RukhShariq harry potter series, percy jackson, but if you want to start off big then you can read lord of the rings as well

Thank you so much for sharing this! This lesson can't get at anywhere ! May your day bleesed and happy!

I wasn't taught like this ever in my whole life, I understood everything what you taught, thank you mam, this was very useful ❤

There are a lot of tips in your video that really helps me :)

@emineaygun561

9 жыл бұрын

avoid using really:PP

@nourchaar4503

9 жыл бұрын

Emine aygün (There are) & (a lot of) too :P

@chrisg.6509

9 жыл бұрын

And just "help" no s

@nourchaar4503

9 жыл бұрын

Hahaha

@joonpark2135

9 жыл бұрын

apparently you DID NOT pay attention that much. She CLEARLY said do not use "THERE ARE". But then again i do not agree with the instructor in alot of things like at 2:11 she should have wrote, Students face many issues at the University or Universities if She didnt want to use "THE" in the sentence. Unless the University is the name of the university but i doubt that, hopefully.

It all makes so much more sense now! Writing English has been difficult for me since I’m bilingual, I lost a lot of writing classes back in school because I didn’t speak the language😣 thank you! I will be using this for sure.

Thank you teacher Emma! i will follow your suggestions now i am going to write a different way to express my ideas

Thank you Emma for your teachings I passed IELTS academic with Band 7 last month.

Thank you. It just made my day and how ever i was making exactly these 5 mistakes in my essays.

Thanks for saving my money

@simonkordloo7980

6 жыл бұрын

money money money

Thank you so much for making video. I’m currently taking an English first year college reading and writing course I’m having a hard time constructing my sentence. English is not native language, I’m glad I can watch your videos and learn. Thank you. - By the way I love your teaching styles, clear and easy to understand plus your voice is comforting.

Short, simple, and educational. I was making at least three of the mistakes every single time that I wrote a formal letter. Thanks!

Thank you for assisting me in the improvement of writing. God bless you.

This is great. Doing the quiz immediately after watching this video really helped me solidify this new found knowledge. Thank you, Emma.

it is mazing to have a dexterous teacher like you , you are providing immense knowledge to learners. truly hats off to your effort.

I just love how you explain everything and that helps significantly

I hate English but that is why I am here. I will make it my strength.

@khoa8718

5 жыл бұрын

Alejandro Morales well said

@williamli0722

5 жыл бұрын

I don’t feel so good.

@ayushsharma7036

5 жыл бұрын

Alejandro Morales Yes because It always decrease our overall percentage.

@divashankarvarnaraja1747

5 жыл бұрын

Alejandro Morales all the best

@envyvaliente2152

5 жыл бұрын

Shut up fuck up get up here

The most important is I have learned even a little bit of knowledge the proper use [WORDs] in academic writing, Thank you, Emma, for this video

This is one of the most useful videos on writings I found on KZread

This answered a lot of my questions !! Thank you so much Emma.

This video really helped me a lot!! Thank you so much! I feel more confident in my essay writing! Can u make videos on how to write different type of middle/high school essays?

@AlexHilarious

8 жыл бұрын

Singaporean siol... U taking o levels this year?

@ttheguyy

7 жыл бұрын

gg tmr start liao

Definitely need this! I’m taking this written exam for transfer students in a hour! Wish me luck

So HELPFUL OMG Tips for writing: 1. Avoid contractions 2. Avoid there is/there are (sentence become stronger to the point) 3.Avoid really, very, a lot, so (weakens writing) Use “many” or “much” ex:Much of the time is wasted 4. Have subject, verb, object 5.Use strong verbs When you see verb and noun (try to use verb) Example 1 : he gave assistance -> He assisted Ex 2: made an objection -> He objected (Does the noun have verb form?)

Thank you for your wonderful teaching. I have been learning English for more than an year. My speaking skills got improved. However, I have to improve my writing skills. When I started learning, I came across your videos. When I am looking into your videos, it's becoming more easy for me to correct the mistakes on writing part.

really helpful, thanx a lot

Good teaching better than my English teacher

@cuongon7504

6 жыл бұрын

LOL

@blueandbronzeravenclaw1961

4 жыл бұрын

What if you teacher reads this!😯

You have this ability to make me focus on what you're saying. I usually skip 10+seconds forward and I'm suprised I didn't in this video. Anyways, thank you! I learned a lot.

This vid never gets old & we still need good English writing skills✨

Thank you so much. I can use these tips for my students and my own essay. These tips apply to writing in other languages too.

Great tips! I also say avoid using phrasal verbs. For example: give up = forfeit; go down = decrease; do over = repeat. This usually improves formality. It also helps shorten sentences, like your tips #2, #4 and #5. Simplicity is key :)

I love this video. Explains concepts I never understood. Thanks a lot

I bet you're quite a good teacher ❤️❤️, very patient and comprehensible

7:04 Can you teach my how to draw a straight line like that?

@zm4261

9 жыл бұрын

it's straighter than me using a ruler 0_o

@JWu-jt7fz

9 жыл бұрын

That straight line :O

@MrAndyCarlos

9 жыл бұрын

xX zebyrocks456 Xx LMAO!

@friedchicken1

9 жыл бұрын

xX zebyrocks456 Xx did you buy the ruler "swerver 5000"?

@dhirupranadheer

9 жыл бұрын

lol

Simple and straight to the point. Excellent teacher.

You have no clue how helpful your video is...Thank you!

I wanted to say that this video really helped me with feeling stressed and knowledge Thank you 😊

knowledge is fun 😊

@user-zg1xx4wo6c

5 жыл бұрын

Lender Sneaks you're such a Ravenclaw xD.

@abdullalahalzouman9445

5 жыл бұрын

Are you serious?! Knowledge is useless for gamers! *_Watching this video and says Knowledge is the best_* *Edit: You must be a gamer to read this.*

@mcthiccmac7319

5 жыл бұрын

Knowledge is fun But I’m to lazy to gain such a magnificent thing

@3iwriter422

5 жыл бұрын

That depends on the way you interact with it.

Thanks I really like your videos, Everything is so helpful, I've been watched your video a few months ago and I think that my knowledge is getting better. Thanks again for everything you have done for all of us around the world.

u r an excellent teacher. You taught me the lesson which i had failed to learn during my whole academic years. Thank u teacher. Oh! yes, your smile is great! Love u!

You helped a lot in improving my writing skills. Thank you Emma.

I'm 9 and this helped me

@matplayz23

7 жыл бұрын

Yeah I know u are weird if u reply

@escobedojazz

7 жыл бұрын

cool :D

@chrissysingh6923

7 жыл бұрын

+JACKIE Chan how rude

@hbktj2226

7 жыл бұрын

U a perverted sick weirdo

@user-wq7dv3vs3p

7 жыл бұрын

cool ! .. where you from ?

Thank you (from Thailand student.)

I'm learning more English from you. English is my first language and I can barely speak it correctly. Thank you so much!

I dreamt of making my writing skills stronger and from nowhere I landed to this video. Again thank you

I'm confused.. I can't shorten my sentences because there is a number of word to target. And some say to use complex sentences..

@rickcarvalhosantiago7416

5 жыл бұрын

What she means is that some words or terms we commonly use at home or with friends, are used as colloquialism. And that makes your writing poor and non-professional.

@marklu8566

5 жыл бұрын

Rick Santiago hi

@ctoe5028

5 жыл бұрын

When you use a good mix of short and long sentences, it makes your writing interesting

@0Raik

5 жыл бұрын

In my experience teachers are sadist f*cks that don't get along with students (even if you think you do, they experts in faking a smile). None of them is consistent so you need to learn each one as like a new cat. Always listen to others who had a previous teacher and their warnings. Teachers don't change, YOU change.

@lovettuduebor1902

4 жыл бұрын

I want to say that word count is a very high/middle school thing. Professional writing and college writing concentrates more on length, like how many pages something needs to be, letter font and size. The only writing that might focus on word count is journalism.

Thank you for the academic writing lesson. Your video is very helpful.

Thank you so much teacher. Every day I watch your videos to improve my knowledge.

I watched this video because I want to improve my writing. English is not my first language. I appreciate the uploader 😀

this video is helping us to improve our english skills and its a great platform to enhance our english writing skills Thanks Emma

@desireensaspa5801

4 жыл бұрын

thaingk you for teaching us😌😌

AMAZING!! :) i speak spanish but i KNOW that i can use this tips for essays as well.. thx.

@tkkhan566

4 жыл бұрын

I want to friendship with you.

That's perfect , Thank you very much my teacher 😊❤

This helped me out for my grade five writing! I'm 9, I do grade six by the way Keep up the good work Miss. Emma!

Awesome tips, very useful for GCSE English.

very helpful , very simple , thank u

@jianminshi

10 жыл бұрын

Avoid use very, plz. haha

@BrentWigginsWords

10 жыл бұрын

Aaron Shi Dead Poets Society taught us well!

Thank you for putting the Arabic translation on the video, your follower from Iraq. Please continue to put it.

This was worth the full watch. Thank you.

You want to be a better writer? A B W ALWAYS BE WRITING

@TimeManInJail

5 жыл бұрын

To add onto that you will improve faster with someone correcting your work.

@nooriman5944

4 жыл бұрын

What should I write? Idk where to start

@MissteriousMisstress

4 жыл бұрын

@@nooriman5944 just free write - and some thing will come out. Or choose a topic of interest

@sejfzlrrhman

4 жыл бұрын

What the hell is "YABWA"?

@HeiMarLy

4 жыл бұрын

Syed Fazlur Rahman lol I was wondering if I had missed something orrr...

Anyone else watching this and not going to school?

You're a amazing teacher ! A kiss from Brazil! 👏🏻

Hi Emma. Thanks for this video. I just watched your video from 9 years ago and I also watched the last one, and you look the same. How could you be that awesome.

This lesson is resourceful and helpful.

This lesson was "really" "very" useful, "so" thank you!

I really enjoyed this video it was both informative and entertaining. Thanks for taking the time for these instructions.

Thanks for your lesson, i have been studying english for 0ne month in college , i will try to hard learn about english

This video was so helpful for my students.

@carolinemcgookin2799

8 жыл бұрын

Good Job☝👍👌✌

@-chairs-9541

6 жыл бұрын

*b_e_a_n_i_e *b_o_o *b_r_o *c_u_t_i_e she is my teacher. Lol

@GadGetHackss

6 жыл бұрын

So you're a teacher and you need another teacher to help you?

@yukiw3951

6 жыл бұрын

i agree

@deresse25

6 жыл бұрын

Refer to rule no 3 do not use so in sentences.

The video helped my writing improve. Thank you Emma.

@sophiaw2761

9 жыл бұрын

Chandi Tome haha !

Thank you so much for this! I used to get 7 to 8 upon 15 marks for the summary section but after watching this video, I got 13/15 for my summary in prelims! tysm!

Thank you for making this beautiful video.This really help me with my 5th grade essays.