2/2 [ Disguise] You have crush on a nerd in school who is a dangerous mafia in disguise

The 2nd part of disguise is here. All the secrets will open now. I hope you enjoyed the story.

Пікірлер: 71

  • @casparshree3346
    @casparshree33467 ай бұрын

    Please we need a bonus... Can't get enough of this masterpiece ❤❤❤❤

  • @fictionook277
    @fictionook2777 ай бұрын

    oww !!!.... my heart fluttered throughout the whole part!! Beautifully written💌

  • @kook_girl
    @kook_girl7 ай бұрын

    You are underarest for making such masterpiece 👑

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    7 ай бұрын

    😂❤

  • @gabyreyes1057
    @gabyreyes10577 ай бұрын

    I was going to sleep 😴😴 but this Beautiful end of masterpiece came out and couldn't Wait til tomorrow. Looooove it ❤❤😊😊

  • @SANJANA-ln4sb
    @SANJANA-ln4sb7 ай бұрын

    22:32 remind me so beautiful so elegant just looking like wow😂😂

  • @Priyankayadav-nt5ep
    @Priyankayadav-nt5ep7 ай бұрын

    Bonus pls🙈❤

  • @richiee1843
    @richiee18436 ай бұрын

    I loved it. IT WAS A CHEF KISS YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS💖

  • @Ash-Bts07
    @Ash-Bts077 ай бұрын

    omg so good, I am crying here!

  • @nupurmacwan6585
    @nupurmacwan65857 ай бұрын

    Another master piece ❤you're the best author ❤ I PURPLE YOU 💜

  • @Dreamers3144
    @Dreamers31445 ай бұрын

    That was just Amazing ❤❤

  • @madhuramsiddhaayurvedicsho5393
    @madhuramsiddhaayurvedicsho53935 ай бұрын

    3:20 Suho !! The moment i read it it reminded me if lee su ho !! The sociopath😂😂😂

  • @Superstar-uh4tx
    @Superstar-uh4tx7 ай бұрын

    No author is 30 years old a ahjumma i feel attacked now lol. Great story i liked it . I mean he did threaten her so it will take time and convincing from his side ,and i know he had his reasongs for doing that .

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    6 ай бұрын

    I'm not 30😭

  • @salinyadharmarathna2807
    @salinyadharmarathna28072 ай бұрын

    ur imaginations😻 i love it♥

  • @Dia-yp8lc
    @Dia-yp8lc6 ай бұрын

    Masterpiece ❤ we need bonus

  • @umaira036
    @umaira0367 ай бұрын

    Masterpiece ff I loved it ❤❤❤

  • @SimranKaur-tc2pc
    @SimranKaur-tc2pc7 ай бұрын

    Your doing such a great job keep going but pls little fast ❤❤❤❤

  • @ArchanaKumari-eg3ok
    @ArchanaKumari-eg3ok7 ай бұрын

    This is the best ff ever I seen before 💯

  • @user-wx4zm9on5n
    @user-wx4zm9on5n5 ай бұрын

    I just love it ❤❤❤❤

  • @Tesrien_fictions
    @Tesrien_fictions7 ай бұрын

    So so late but you slayed it like we expected. But i dont want it to be end 😭😅

  • @MajdaAli
    @MajdaAli7 ай бұрын

    part 3 , ia m begging u please even if it is a bonus. damn you have blessed mind and hands

  • @jeonsneha_
    @jeonsneha_7 ай бұрын

    Soooooooooo amazing😍😍😍

  • @prettie405
    @prettie4057 ай бұрын

    we need bonus plzzz❤

  • @mohanapriyakilimipragatien1157
    @mohanapriyakilimipragatien11577 ай бұрын

    bonus part please😍😍😍

  • @nisha3161
    @nisha31617 ай бұрын

    It's so good. I love and enjoyed it a lot. I feel bad for Jungkook's brother. Thanks author for this ff of yours. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

  • @kimzy2822
    @kimzy28227 ай бұрын

    Ahhh i want more!!🥰😍😘

  • @riddhisharma195
    @riddhisharma1957 ай бұрын

    13:40 ohhhh god this line idk why but it affects me alot

  • @skymccoy3231
    @skymccoy32317 ай бұрын

    BONUS PART PLZZZZ❤❤❤❤

  • @susanlogsdon3315
    @susanlogsdon33157 ай бұрын

    Loved it

  • @Marriamiii
    @Marriamiii6 ай бұрын

    Bonus part please❤❤❤

  • @ayushigupta3990
    @ayushigupta39907 ай бұрын

    Please make bonus part 💜〽️

  • @wendyodell356
    @wendyodell3567 ай бұрын

    Loved it! ❤❤❤ 💜🫶💐

  • @vishmiadheesha527
    @vishmiadheesha5277 ай бұрын

    it so cute

  • @mahanaeem1824
    @mahanaeem18247 ай бұрын

    why am i cryingggg

  • @BELLSArmy12
    @BELLSArmy127 ай бұрын

    96 views no likes what theffff yt is drinking again now 😂😂

  • @btsarmylily658
    @btsarmylily6587 ай бұрын

    Bonus bonus bonus 😢😢😢

  • @its_us_the_rockstars
    @its_us_the_rockstars6 ай бұрын

    Wow u write master peices please make some horror one fan fictions also

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    6 ай бұрын

    Ok I'll try,👍

  • @Bellewithbeast
    @Bellewithbeast14 күн бұрын

    So I learnt one thing from this that always help that nerdy guy cause we never know he might turn out to be a mafia!!!!!😭💀

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    13 күн бұрын

    😂

  • @Bellewithbeast

    @Bellewithbeast

    13 күн бұрын

    @@bkf.7 Seriously the storyline was quite amazing its still stuck in my head💗

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    13 күн бұрын

    @@Bellewithbeast thank you ❤️❤️❤️😀

  • @bhumisingla7672
    @bhumisingla76727 ай бұрын

    Bonus please please please please

  • @RajeevFreyaz
    @RajeevFreyaz7 ай бұрын

    Bonus part plz

  • @btsfairytaleworld3482
    @btsfairytaleworld34826 ай бұрын

    He have power on his. He just need to speak. And booom

  • @devikotthuru9885
    @devikotthuru98857 ай бұрын

    Bonus please🥺😩😩😩

  • @astridrodrizuse2893
    @astridrodrizuse28937 ай бұрын

    Bonus bonus bonus bonus 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • @RamisaMushsharat
    @RamisaMushsharat7 ай бұрын

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  • @angellaxmi3903
    @angellaxmi39036 ай бұрын

    Plz make new one fast mafia obe plzzz🤧🤧🤧🥺💜💜💜💜💜

  • @laxmikatare8813
    @laxmikatare88137 ай бұрын

    begging u for a bonus please please

  • @jameelahmed1046
    @jameelahmed10467 ай бұрын

    BONUS !! BONUS !! BONUS !! 😀😀😀 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @catherinerapisaldo1671
    @catherinerapisaldo16717 ай бұрын

    ❤❤😊😊

  • @dappujyotshna4198
    @dappujyotshna41987 ай бұрын

    Bonus

  • @kookie687
    @kookie6877 ай бұрын

    This gave me a whole world zooo

  • @tae_fictional_world
    @tae_fictional_world4 ай бұрын

    hey unni.... can u plz make a ff " when your bias caught u reading his 21+ ffs" Jungkook as bias. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.... Can I get a shoutout??

  • @iknowyou3089
    @iknowyou30897 ай бұрын

    loved it!!! But..isn't yn like a MINOR?!

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    7 ай бұрын

    She is 19

  • @iknowyou3089

    @iknowyou3089

    7 ай бұрын

    @@bkf.7 oh my bad 😭👍

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    7 ай бұрын

    @@iknowyou3089 😂

  • @khushiahmed5139
    @khushiahmed51397 ай бұрын

    I don't like how you nake a girl character weak girl can fight girl not weak they're strong a girl strong I don't like girl character you you make in this It’s my opinion

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    7 ай бұрын

    It's ok if you don't like the girl's character. But it's just a character in a fictional story. But in reality too, there are actually some girls who are really weak. How can you say all girls can fight. Not everyone is same. Even I can't fight. Dude if I just fight with words only I cry so easily. I'm myself just 45 kg and I can't even slap anyone. Because that's not how my personality is. That's how I was born and I'm a soft person. I don't know any physical fight coz I was a normal girl studying is school. Just like most of us. I was not going to gym to make some abs? Do normal teenagers go to gym for abs? Or are they very strong emotionally? Not everyone is same. And there are alot of people like that. It's not like my character was unrealistic? I wrote what actually happens in reality also. That's it. 👍

  • @khushiahmed5139

    @khushiahmed5139

    7 ай бұрын

    @@bkf.7 I'm also normal girl I don't go to gym or learned to fight I am also emotionally but I am strong enough when this type of things happened and yes some gurls like this but girls are strong every girl is strong it’s ok emotional it’s normal but at least she can try but she never try to fight back and it's not about age its not about weight it's not if you go to gym or you have abs or not or you learned fight or not it's about your will power and woman have so much will power and you said how can I say that every woman is strong bro every girl in strong some are think they're weak some are think they're girl they're weak they're can fight back I know a teenage girl strong or not just you mind think that I am not strong but you are strong because every girl is strong but someone think they're weak because of they're weight like you said some are think that they're girl that's why they're weak and it’s reality that's why people think girls are weak and girl need someone to protect herself and that's why girls also think that they're week and other need someone to who can protect they're self but she can protect they're self but girls are strong and girl have more will power then boys girls are strong will power then man and she can fight back she can try but you though girls not strong because of her weight it's not about weight it's not about if you are emotional song on not are you go to gym or not do you have abs or not or do you learned fight or not it’s about your will power and woman will power strong just you thinking that you thought that going gym and or learning fighting make you strong no will power make you strong it's reality that if a girl think that going gym or having abs or learned or have more weight make you strong then society man will think women girls are weak and they're need man to protect they're self and it’s your will power make you strong not gym having abs or learned fight weight It's just your thinking

  • @bkf.7

    @bkf.7

    2 ай бұрын

    ​​​​​@@khushiahmed5139 I'm just talking about reality. Those bullies Litrally made someone comm!t su!cide and since they are so rich they didn't even recieve any punishment. Wake up dear. You are not in a fairy land..so the girl character is. The girl's will power made her stand up against those bullies but ultimately she got beaten up. So now what about the will power you are talking about?? A normal, middle class family girl can't fight untill she either have abs or immense money or she atleast has a billionaire mafia bf. So wake up to reality and not everything can happen like how you imagine. In this cruel world, there is no law to protect anyone. We need to protect ourselves. So make sure you learn martial arts and make abs and it will give you confidence. And yes when it comes to living Normal life against discrimination in society, then afcourse you don't need abs or muscles. That I agree. But here I'm talking about physical abuse. And today only I read your comment reply cause I'm very busy.

  • @kissingjungkookbreathless
    @kissingjungkookbreathless7 ай бұрын

    I don’t want it to end🥲 is that bad or good? 🥀

  • @kpopdellyfan1433

    @kpopdellyfan1433

    7 ай бұрын

    Good because I don’t want it to end eaither

  • @cutepingpallballl

    @cutepingpallballl

    7 ай бұрын

    Good

  • @Thatgirl-840

    @Thatgirl-840

    6 ай бұрын

    Bro it’s that good that I am blushing hella crazy 😝 😊

  • @tofazzalhossain8226

    @tofazzalhossain8226

    6 ай бұрын

    Same❤

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